Shago was beaten it supposedly only drove out omen (or at least it helped). Omen was then beaten by ARIA at some point later. So…there’s that.
Keep up the good work, glad to see a longer chapter that cuts between several different sections.
seems like it.
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Well shes been dead for that long.
Can I humbly ask for Hisako-Kim buddy fan art? 
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“Kim and Hisako: Thunder Buddies 4 Lyf” would be hilarious!
I pictured this when Hisako smiled, though:
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When all is said and done I’m totally printing the novel and making a hard cover for it
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like this?
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mut ji gun!!!
I prefer the original Punch Fighter on the Ultra 64…
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That street fighter/ Microsoft reference…
That is kind of how I feel about ARIA. I don’t think she is a bad guy, but she definitely is not a good guy either lol Her goal/purpose is good, she just is a little harsh about it lol
Sometimes a little roughing is in order. I mean, when in doubt get the boot out.
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A Pagemaster reference!? Awesome!!! 
Just got around to read the latest two chapters. It’s some good s#it!
I don’t read alot of books and I am definitely no master of literature, but I really enjoyed reading this so far. It’s fun, full of action and has an awesome way of painting the room with words. Love it.
I read the 4th chapter. Cinder’s awesome. Nothing else can be said.
I get why they mentioned Playstation and PC in the last chapter now and not Xbox. The Xbox in this universe is the Ultrabox. And since Kim Wu’s uncle was anti-Ultratech, he probably didn’t allow his sons to get one. I guess it’s not all that complicated.
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Indeed. Ultratech it’s the biggest corporation in this universe, and any who challenges their hegemony surelly would be absorbed. If Microsoft ever existed, now they are part of Ultratech.
My guess into Gargos’ origin:
Sounds like Hisako has the ability to purify Jago in some form or another if I’m reading that right, she was the one that opened and dragged him through the portal right? Her being a guardian I wonder about.
My theory is that Gargos is a Gargoyle and like other gargoyles he was created to be a guardian. His job was to ward off evil spirits from the holy temple and to protect the worshipers. Over time Gargos had grew jealous of all the worship that take place before him daily. Gargos very much wanted to be a god himself, he quietly schemed against the temple. However his schemes were not successful. Gargos was eventually caught in the act and the other gargoyles sent out to destroy him. While Gargos was as strong as the others they out number him . In an effort to escape he hastily summoned a random portal. He unwittingly locked himself away for centuries, in the astral plane. The green gem stone stone that marble throughout his body glowed radiantly and in that moment he knew exactly where he was. Gargos grew stronger and stronger, but he was stuck. Gargos’ joy quickly became anger, all this power and no one to rule over. But He eventually made contact with a lil blue man through his prayers, and Gargos was more then happy to reply.
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