So on FFN, I took part in a game called “Review Exchange.” What happens is that the first person post a topic on how many chapters or words they are willing to review. Then, anyone sees Person A’s post and PMs them if interested. If so, they begin to exchange reviews. I made a topic for my story as to find constructive feedback to flow of the story and any nitpicks that I might have overlooked.
Fortunately, someone saw my post and PM’ed me if we could do a review exchange since he (or she) is also looking for the same thing, even though it means I would have to venture into unfamiliar territory; same for the other person.
Anywho, he (or she) was kind enough to give me a review on the first chapter of my story in exchange of a review from me, and this is the result:
So, what do you all think? Pretty reasonable to me.
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