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#221

@adymunrox @MandrillManiac @KIFANATIC8488 @TheNinjaOstrich @KevBones10 @GeneralScrebor @CriticalSix4677

Another update on Chapter Eight: was able to write down the ending with ease; now just need to close the gap in the middle. Another hint about my OC: she loves animals–particularly those with Chinese mythology.


#222

Cool deal dude


#223

Um…I don’t think anyone had noticed, but…I’m a lady, js


#224

Oops, my appologies


#225

It’s all good.


#226

I knew! I guess from the bored at work thread? I dunno, just saying lol


#227

I know that you knew. I just meant anyone (apart from a select few) do not know that I’m a woman.


#228

@adymunrox

Need some advice: was thinking about incorporating a demon attack in the Thanza village, but was not sure how to do so. If not, then I can focus on the Cult of Gargos


#229

You mean how to incorporate it story wise?


#230

You mean demons like Gargos’ minions kinda thing? If the Cult of Gargos is involved here at all it could be that the demons arrive to feed on whatever corruption they’ve been able to create? Or to look for vessels to use possibly if they are other Omens.


#231

No. Kinda like a rouge demon that attacked the village without warning, kind of like with princess mononoke because there is still that unknown figure from Ch. 5


#232

Ooh ok I see. Hm. Are the characters present for the attack or is it something that happened unbeknownst to them? If it’s the latter you could have someone who was present during the attack recount it to them. Like a flashback scene?


#233

Not bad on the latter part. I might consider it


#234

Update: It has been a while, but I should let you know that I have finished a flashback scene in Chapter Eight. Now I only have one more gap to the ending to finish it

@adymunrox @MandrillManiac @KIFANATIC8488 @GeneralScrebor @CriticalSix4677 @KevBones10


#235

Awesome, looking forward to seeing what you’ve come up with


#236

I think it’d be better to read previous chapters before seeing what I have in store for Chapter Eight. Don’t want anyone to cheat


#237

Can’t even really remember what’s happened so fast.


#238

Do you remember where you stopped at? I would tell you, but…I don’t want to spoil anything, unless someone does


#239

Can’t really remember. After passing nursing school, the NCLEX, getting a new job, and reading manic mandrills story I can’t remember much of anything.


#240

Oh dear…hmm…is there something I can do to help?